I have now re-done and improved my animatic. To do this I changed many aspects of the original to hopefully fit in and adjust accordingly to the feedback I received from my audience and my teachers.
- I have taken out any speech bubbles I added so it doesn't look like a comic strip and more like an animatic
- In the last shot where only a scream is heard I took it off and just had a blank square with a scream voice over.
- I have continued the sound over any voice over it needed to be added to.
- I took out the second part and added in more shots to the first to make it 2 minutes long exactly and less confusing for the audience.
- I also added different music to make it more dramatic and film-like.
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